Testing the water - does this work for you ?

[Charlton]

Hi John
only thing good about the first one is, the sky reflecting on the water which is part of the original the rest in my honest humble opinion is crap. Would try and lighten the rocks in the original around the pool to see if you can give them some texture.

[Davey1970]

mr Charlton,

some people have feeling's you know.

[Charlton]

mr Charlton,

some people have feeling's you know.

he wanted honest opinions didn't he and I was being diplomatic wasn't I

[Davey1970]

he wanted honest opinions didn't he and I was being diplomatic wasn't I

a take it we won't be seeing the picture in 1 of your article's alan.

[Charlton]

a take it we won't be seeing the picture in 1 of your article's alan.

no there is no fish in it

[Charlton]

John are you still speaking to us